First of all, I like the pose. The movement of the hair and her hips makes it very dynamic.
A few things though:
The folds (for lack of a better word)at the joints are a bit to overdone. For example, at the elbow: I think it would be better to get rid of the line or make it softer, and instead use shading to indicate that it's bending there.
Also, the shading could be a bit smoother in places such as the bottom of her dress and her left arm.
Your anatomy is very good, though,and I really like your style
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"I suppose we can at least prove that we're alive in the present. Unfortunately, the present doesn't last more than an instant before becoming the past" -~SuperMaids
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always_forever thinks you smelly but shyly kisses you head.
Irene Sekersky
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art blog; [link]
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always_forever thinks you smelly but shyly kisses you head.
Irene Sekersky
A few things though:
The folds (for lack of a better word)at the joints are a bit to overdone. For example, at the elbow: I think it would be better to get rid of the line or make it softer, and instead use shading to indicate that it's bending there.
Also, the shading could be a bit smoother in places such as the bottom of her dress and her left arm.
Your anatomy is very good, though,and I really like your style
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"I suppose we can at least prove that we're alive in the present. Unfortunately, the present doesn't last more than an instant before becoming the past" -~SuperMaids
Like my art? Commission me! [link]
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art blog; [link]
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"I suppose we can at least prove that we're alive in the present. Unfortunately, the present doesn't last more than an instant before becoming the past" -~SuperMaids
Like my art? Commission me! [link]
--
"Love to throw yourself on the earth and kiss it...Love all men, love everything...Don't be ashamed of that ecstacy, prize it, for it is a gift of God and a great one; it is not given to many, but only to the elect."
--Zosima, Brothers Karamazov
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